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lineart from some weeks ago, i coloured it before i got sick of it XD now there's something in the anatomy and folds i don't really like but anyway i'm satisfied of the composition, concept and colors :3
i won't tell who's the other man cos it may be a spoiler xD Comments
 phoenix right si chiama il tipo mi pare...ho visto qualche episodio....
-- THIS..IS...ITALIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH check my photogallery  [link] che bello sy >_< molto ben fatto davvero
 -- [link] > my blog! -!Mirka/Ivory/AnIvorySoul!- My english is...disgusting, sorry ç_____ç  It's amazing
 -- The Angel is the Devil's puppet Nick x Ellis =   oh che bello, mi piace un sacco come hai colorato gli occhi e il viso di Phoenix! *_*
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Mi vuoi pignola, super pignola o proprio cattiva? XD
Il concept è ottimo, bella idea ma ci sono un paio di problemucci con le ombre, quindi la colorazione.
Parlando di Nick/Ryuichi parte sinistra i miei dubbi maggiori sono per il suo braccio alzato. Secondo me proietterebbe un'ombra diversa sulla panza e un po' di ombra anche sul viso. Ma soprattutto un'ombra verrebbe proiettata anche sulla carta T_T
Il disegno è buono, non mi esalta la mano sulla testa ma è buono.
Il Nick/Ryu di destra è quello + "sfasato" ma perchè la visuale è forzatamente fatta in modo che lui sia vedibile. Anche qui non mi esalta il braccio alzato, ma lo dico solo perchè so le tue potenzialità :3 la posa del braccio è innaturale, potevi magari farlo mentre si tira leggermente giù il berretto con le dita (pollice/indice).
Infine il suo braccio con la mano in tasca con il gomito sfonderebbe la carta. O almeno a quanto mi sembra :/
Ultima mazzata, quello di destra sembra + alto, ma considerando che quello di sinistra ha le gambe divaricate è ok.
Ovviamente non prenderla troppo a male questa critica eh :3 son tutti appunti personali!
Baci!
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